Jake Strange
ENGL 254
January 27, 2015
Blog 4
My first project for our Writing & Communities course is starting to materialize. As I am writing this post, I have submitted by first draft for review from my workshop group. I am confident their feedback will help me greatly in shaping my nebulous initial thoughts into a polished, final product.
Another way to help refine my first draft is to reexamine Buck's article on digital literacy. In the following sections, I have pulled out particular passages that I believe will be of use in creating further drafts of my own analysis.
Introduction
"According to the Pew Internet and American Life Project, as of August 2011, 83% of 18–29 year-olds used a social network site (Madden, 2012). Their interactions on these sites were also purposeful, as Pew reports that this age group is that most concerned with online identity management: 71% of them have changed the privacy settings on the sites they use (Lenhart, Purcell, Smith, & Zickuhr, 2010)."
I have done a bit of ground-level research to take a similar approach in my first draft of this assignment. In order to establish relevancy and convince the reader that my project is important, a good rule of thumb is to pull quantitative statistics about spcial media use.
"I approached this case study with three research questions: 1) How does this writer integrate social network sites into his everyday literacy practices? 2) How does this writer use those literacy practices to represent his identity for multiple audience groups on social network sites? 3) How does this writer negotiate site interfaces to represent his identity and communicate with others?"
While writing my first draft, coming up with an overarching research question to give my writing direction in later sections was incredibly difficult. I'm not satisfied with what I settled with on my first draft, so paying close attention to Buck's research questions and how she ties her findings back to them should help me build on this section.
Methods
"In order to study Ronnie’s literacy practices on social network sites, I followed his online activity for two semesters, Spring 2010 and Fall 2010, and I collected data from the following four sources."
I need to dedicate more of my writing to contextualizing my methods of information gathering. Here, Buck gives the reader a detailed walkthrough of her methodology through research interviews, online texts, a time-use diary (I doubt I will use something like this, given my subject's very limited use of Facebook) and a profile tour.
"Collecting data from these various sources allowed me to develop a multifaceted picture of literate activity in connection with social network sites. The research interviews, for example, allowed me to gauge my own interpretations of comments Ronnie posted online, as well as to gain background information unavailable in the textual activity I recorded. Through the time-use diary, I was able to track literate activity as it was embedded within Ronnie’s daily use of social network sites. The profile tour greatly assisted in my overall view of how Ronnie represented himself online and how each of these different sites worked together within this ecology of practice."
An expansion from the first quote from this section, Buck specifically details how each method assisted in her study. I'd stand to benefit from taking a similar approach, showing how each contributed to a holistic understanding of my subject's digital identity.
Results
"Through Twitter, Ronnie presented himself as a connected techie, a social college student, and a music fan."
Though brief, this sentence does a great job at summarizing Ronnie's portrayal of his self-brand on Twitter. I plan to write a similar concise statement about my subject in a later draft.
"Ronnie’s quotes were populated by writers about writing but also included philosophers like Nietzsche, mathematicians like Paul Erdös, composers like Dmitri Shostakovich and Leonard Bernstein, actors like Bruce Lee, and politicians like Theodore Roosevelt. Coming from almost all men, these quotations speak to the nature of writing, work, music, life, and ambition, portraying Ronnie as thoughtful, well read, and with wide-ranging interests."
I dedicated a large portion of my first draft to one major aspect of my classmate's identity on Facebook. Although his profile is limited due to the fact that it's only been active for a couple of months, he does "like" a wide variety of musicians. I could add something similar to this to give my subject more dimension.
Discussion
"Because Ronnie used social network sites to organize different aspects of his life, he was particularly attuned to the different ways in which his information was dispersed and used, and this was a process that he wanted to have control over."
In my subject interview, I asked a question pertaining to Facebook's data collection practices. My subject gave an answer that differs from Ronnie's, but seeing Buck discuss his thoughts on Facebook's privacy policy encourages me to do the same with my subject.
"Facebook used to include certain default fields on one’s profile where individuals defined themselves primarily by the consumption of various media, listing favorite music, movies, television shows, and favorite quotations and writing an open description in the About Me section. Ronnie declined to fill these sections out, finding these boxes too limiting to explain, for example, his musical tastes."
My subject's "About Me" section is pretty minimal as well, but for what I expect to be a different reason. I should ask my subject why these sections are so bare-bone on his profile.
Conclusion
"Ronnie represents a rather extreme case of social network site use, both through
the number of sites he used and the amount of activity he engaged in on each site."
The first sentence of this section brings everything together from the preceding sections. It will be incredibly important for me to craft a "catch all" statement relative to my subject in later drafts.
"For Ronnie, social network sites index a nexus of information through which he manages and organizes various aspects of his life."
Buck crafts the ultimate purpose of Ronnie's utilization of social media in this sentence. This gives Ronnie's identity on social media a concise purpose.